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Question: How would you improve these two hasty love sonnets?
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Answer #1:
my friend some advice, usually my best work comes in 5-10 intervals of just sitting there and writing. Maybe some punctuation errors will occur, maybe some rewording but in all if I go changing much of the structure the poem becomes weak. Now back to your sonnets I wouldn't change a thing. Great work.Answer #2:
If these are weak sonnets, then mine are dead.Answer #3:
Hi, very lovely, nice flow, i like your language you give a clear and easy view, any one could relate to this poem. deep feelings and good writing. there is nothing wrong with your poems. keep up the good work. Peace out.Answer #4:
You should take a bow my friend. I love them both, I am a closet romantic so I may have a slight crush right now because after reading and rereading. I am the prisoner of your erotic spell! Thank you!Answer #5:
your first one inspired the one I posted, and that wore me out.now another. to much for me. I don't know how you do it.
yes I do ...talent.
Answer #6:
Though my usual style is free verse, I've come to truly love a sonnet. I wish mine were of this caliber.I like the softness of the first and the heat of the second. If I had to chose one over the other, I'd choose the first - mainly because of the more gentle wording.
Very nice.
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